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Fireflies by Azalonozul Fireflies by Azalonozul
My attempt at a new coloring style, does it look good, guys?
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Fabusol Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You would not believe your eyes
If ten million fireflies
Lit up the world as I fell asleep

'Cause they'd fill the open air
And leave teardrops everywhere
You'd think me rude
But I would just stand and stare

I'd like to make myself believe
That planet Earth turns slowly
It's hard to say that I'd rather stay
Awake when I'm asleep
'Cause everything is never as it seems....


Derp, sorry I had to, it was the title!

Cute btw, I think the colouring is good, especially in your manga style. For some reason I thought it was her reflection on the water, regardless I like it, you're getting better. The colouring is much better than before.
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Azalonozul Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like that song too!

Yay! I've improved! Anyway, thanks! I'm glad that you like it!
I'm going another transition right now, I'm actually trying to do a line less drawing this time, and... it really isn't easy.. XD

Now how do I make my comic to be like this?.... XD
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Fabusol Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's not just that I like the song, it's because whenever I hear the word 'fireflies' or read it... I start to sing that song xD.

You have improved, that is a definite point. It may sound odd, but the first thing I thought was "it's not as clunky," which makes no sense. I don't know why I thought it, but I knew something was different. The face seemed well... smoother, the lines were more definite yet softer. The sheen on the hair was a nice touch too.

How do you make it like this? Isn't that simple. Draw like this. Releasing early should never be your prerogative, releasing with quality should be your desire. All the good nuzlockers and comic makes do it. They don't burst out chapters like crazy, some do, but they have much more experience. Just take your time, you're improving.
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Azalonozul Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I actually sang along with your comment, I must say that I wasn't expecting that. XD

Wow, you can really see all that so easily. I'm really happy that I've improved a whole lot from my earlier entries.

You just hit the nail on my head, my friend. I'm quite obsessed with releasing my comic early, but reading comment made me feel like I've lost a lot on weight off my back. Thanks for the great comment, it will be taken very seriously(so expect some changes in page 10) XD
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Fabusol Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You've improved but you still need some improvements, clothing is one. Anatomy, the arms are too thin and stuff like that. However you are on the gradual path of improvement and things cannot be achieved oh so quickly. So just keep aiming for improvement, instead of staying complacent...

Because I will let you know the moment your quality slips >=D
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Azalonozul Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm quite surprised at how you can see and pinpoint all of the things that need some improvements, I'll be sure to fix them all!

Then you must've cringed a lot at page 8. XD
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Fabusol Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't cringe. But it doesn't mean that I'm satisfied :P. Well I'm quite a good critic, I guess.
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Azalonozul Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, I hope to make you satisfied with my comics in the future! :D

You should critic more! The more you critic, the more I can improve!
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