You would not believe your eyes If ten million fireflies Lit up the world as I fell asleep
'Cause they'd fill the open air And leave teardrops everywhere You'd think me rude But I would just stand and stare
I'd like to make myself believe That planet Earth turns slowly It's hard to say that I'd rather stay Awake when I'm asleep 'Cause everything is never as it seems....
Derp, sorry I had to, it was the title!
Cute btw, I think the colouring is good, especially in your manga style. For some reason I thought it was her reflection on the water, regardless I like it, you're getting better. The colouring is much better than before.
It's not just that I like the song, it's because whenever I hear the word 'fireflies' or read it... I start to sing that song xD.
You have improved, that is a definite point. It may sound odd, but the first thing I thought was "it's not as clunky," which makes no sense. I don't know why I thought it, but I knew something was different. The face seemed well... smoother, the lines were more definite yet softer. The sheen on the hair was a nice touch too.
How do you make it like this? Isn't that simple. Draw like this. Releasing early should never be your prerogative, releasing with quality should be your desire. All the good nuzlockers and comic makes do it. They don't burst out chapters like crazy, some do, but they have much more experience. Just take your time, you're improving.
I actually sang along with your comment, I must say that I wasn't expecting that. XD
Wow, you can really see all that so easily. I'm really happy that I've improved a whole lot from my earlier entries.
You just hit the nail on my head, my friend. I'm quite obsessed with releasing my comic early, but reading comment made me feel like I've lost a lot on weight off my back. Thanks for the great comment, it will be taken very seriously(so expect some changes in page 10) XD
You've improved but you still need some improvements, clothing is one. Anatomy, the arms are too thin and stuff like that. However you are on the gradual path of improvement and things cannot be achieved oh so quickly. So just keep aiming for improvement, instead of staying complacent...
Because I will let you know the moment your quality slips >